It’s Greek to me

When St. Martin’s Press sold “Crashers” to a Japanese publishing company, my editor, Keith, told me there was a catch: “The Japanese editor thinks you do a reveal too early. He wants to push it back.”

Translation: A “reveal” is a drawing back of the curtain and a “voila!” moment in a story. For “Crashers,” I give away the identity of one of the bad guys really early in the book. I want the audience to know who he is and to see some of the story through his twisted point of view.

The Japanese editor believed that, for a Japanese audience, this reveal comes too early and will rob the book of some tension.

I asked Keith, “What should I do?”

Keith – whom I adore – is every bit the pragmatist. “Well, first? It isn’t that big a change and it doesn’t affect the outcome of the story,” he said. “And second? It’s in @#$%& Japanese! You couldn’t read it anyway! The hell do you care?”

See why I adore him?

About danahaynes

Dana Haynes is the author of ICE COLD KILL (2013), BREAKING POINT (2011) and CRASHERS (2010) from Minotaur and St. Martin's Press.

Posted on August 31, 2010, in Blog. Bookmark the permalink. Leave a comment.


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