Re-Write Right

Working on-location in Milan, Italy.

This winter, I wrote the first draft of a scene for the next book. The scene takes place in the Piazza del Duomo in Milan, pictured here. Earlier this month, Katy King and I got to travel to Milan to “block” the scene.

That meant I walked the scenes as the characters do. I entered where they did, followed the choreography of a two-pronged firefight. I took in the sights from the point of view of both my protagonist and the antagonists.

Katy took photos, while I jotted notes. We observed the Milanese residents, the tourists, the local and state police, the rhythm of the passers-by.

Now back home, I’m feeding these new facts into the next draft of the novel.

This stuff is invaluable. There is absolutely no book you can read, no website you can visit, that matches the feel of walking the site.

Many novelists hate the re-write process. I’ve rarely had so much fun.

About danahaynes

Dana Haynes is the author of ICE COLD KILL (2013), BREAKING POINT (2011) and CRASHERS (2010) from Minotaur and St. Martin's Press.

Posted on May 28, 2012, in Blog. Bookmark the permalink. Leave a comment.

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